Here is a sample of a
competitor's love letter...
(the underlined words are fill-in-the-blanks for personalizing)Dear Michelle,
You are like a beautiful rose. Your soft skin and blue eyes look right into my soul. I dream of you every night I hope you dream about me! When I saw you today you looked like an angel and you took my breath away. You are my sweet angel. I can't stop thinking about you; you are on my mind night and day and I am forever at the mercy of your beautiful smile...
The BIG problems with this letter are:
1. This letter is way over the top with enough sappy sweetness to choke a horse!
2. This letter has HUGE grammatical errors. Would you know how to correct them?
3. This letter doesn't express REAL emotion, only immature poetic ramblings.4. This letter is designed to be exchanged strictly from a man to a woman.
This letter could ruin your relationship! Would you know when the best time would be to send a letter like this? (We think NEVER, but...) A letter like this, sent in the early stages of a relationship, could really turn someone off.
Now check out our letter sample!